Tuesday 30 March 2021

Lake Kaitawa Camp!!!


So in week 7 ALL of the year 6s got to go to our school camp at Lake Kaitawa and we went on lots of walks that took my breath away. They were all hard but every time we got to the top, the view made  everything better. The food, was fantabulous! I had the best time and made lots of new friends and memories. To all of the year 5s you are going have the bomb. com at camp Kaitawa. Hope you enjoy!!!

 

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  1. Anonymous30 March 2021 at 12:20

    Your slides were amazing but I have quite a bit of feedback for you. Please don't start a sentence with AND there is no need. Their are a lot of ANDS in the last slide I thought that you could change that.

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  2. Anonymous1 April 2021 at 10:54

    Hi Te atawhai, I really like how you have described the walks so well they were very breathtaking. It reminds me of the actual camp. The views were exceptional!-Ella

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