Haiku art

Hi I am Te Atawhai.  In term 2 I did some Haiku art about matariki.  I did my haiku art about a maori legend.  It was difficult to draw the faces of the  people.  I drew a man and a women.  I learnt that other countries have  different aspects of matariki . This is what I wrote

 As they did there hair. 
The sound of beautiful noise, 
They could not resist. 

I know I was successful because I had 5 syllables the start.  

7 at the middle and 5 at the end.

I think i did a good picher.

Tell me if you think it is good in the comments.